Tom is my
classmate who likes sport very much, so he join the sports club in our school.
Tom likes playing many kinds of sportsman; for example, he plays football,
basketball, and baseball. Tom prefers baseball to basketball. Baseball seems
more interesting to Tom. Tom feels baseball is a really gentleman’s sport, for
it is more structured than basketball; moreover, baseball requires athletes to
use more skill than agression when playing, so Tom respects baseball players
the most because of this.
tya... i think "he join" should be replaced into "he joins"..
BalasHapusbut, for all..its a gorgeous paragraph.. :)
fighting!
Ups, you're right.
HapusThanks tutii :D
Tom is my classmate who likes sport very much, so he joins the sports club in our school. Tom likes playing many kinds of sportsman; for example, he plays football, basketball, and baseball. Tom prefers baseball to basketball. Baseball seems more interesting to Tom. Tom feels baseball is a really gentleman’s sport, for it is more structured than basketball; moreover, baseball requires athletes to use more skill than agression when playing, so Tom respects baseball players the most because of this.
BalasHapusexcellent :)
BalasHapusThanks
Hapus